Hello! I’m a proffessional tennis player and many people consider me to be the gratest player of all time. Right now I have a little break from competitions. The first grand slam will be in January so i have some time for my family at the moment.
Usually I don’t attend any parties. More likely I’m at home with my family than partying somewhere with my friends.
Recently I’ve been feeling that some thing are changing in my life. I’ve reached my goal, I’m the best tennis player in the world, I’m married and I have twins. I feel like the time of retirement is coming and I can’t do anything to avoid it, but I’m not afraid of it.
Not a long time ago I was walking down a street in New York and a young girl recognized me. She was so amazed that she even couldn’t open her mouth. Usually when such things happen I try to be friendly and calm. I honour my fans and try to be nice to them.
There is just one more thing to say. I love my job and my life because tennis also my hobby and I enjoy it a lot. Have a great time everybody!
Nice work but you haven’t used too many continuous tenses.
The corrections:
professional – one f, double s;
greatest – mind the spelling;
Right now I’m having a break – this could be continuous tense as this is temporary;
some things – plural;
Not long time ago – no article;
tennis is my hobby – don’t miss any important words;
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